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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题发展类 - 国际援助
关键词developed countries, moral obligation, aid, developing countries, harm
考察能力分析国际援助的复杂效果

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:question has long divided opinion
├── 让步:acknowledge concerns about effectiveness
├── 立场:moral responsibility exists
└── 限定:form and delivery require consideration

【主体段1 - 支持援助】
├── 道德论证
│   ├── historical redress(colonisation)
│   └── common humanity(preventable suffering)
├── 实际利益
│   ├── reduces migration pressures
│   ├── prevents disease spread
│   ├── expands markets
│   └── international security
└── 总结:not a zero-sum game

【主体段2 - 质疑援助】
├── 问题1:creates dependency
├── 问题2:enriches corrupt elites
├── 问题3:tied to donor interests
├── 替代方案:trade, technology transfer
└── 承认:critiques cannot be dismissed

【主体段3 - 改革方案】
├── 立场:reform, not abandon
├── 原则:transparent, accountable, partnership
├── 重点:build local capacity
├── 方法:cash transfers, microfinance
└── 配套:fair trade, debt relief

【结尾段】
├── 让步:past aid has fallen short
├── 核心:moral case not negated
├── 方案:better aid + systemic changes
└── 结尾:neither defensible nor in interest

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
historical redress历史补偿there is a case for historical redress
common humanity共同的人性common humanity demands a response
zero-sum game零和游戏prosperity is not a zero-sum game
funnelled through通过...输送money funnelled through corrupt governments
tied to与...挂钩aid tied to donor country interests
build local capacity建设本地能力should build local capacity
cash transfers现金转账direct support through cash transfers
local agency本地能动性respectful of local agency

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"at the expense of"任何讨论代价的话题
"not a zero-sum game"国际合作、竞争话题
"enriches elites rather than reaching those in need"腐败、不平等话题
"build capacity rather than create dependency"教育、发展话题
"complement rather than substitute for"政策配合话题

💭 思考延伸


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